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and no references?? i can't draw old people without references OTL
uhsdf critique-wise the guy on the left's lower hand looks really feminine compared to his other hand
and it looks like he only has one joint on his middle finger
and that is all i have to say
aaAAAAH thank you!! ; ___ ; You are right about the lower hand I had a really hard time with it.. now that I look at it, it looks really small too, I'll fix that! 8( Thank you so much for pointing that out adhgah
HOLY SHIT WOWOWOWOW<3
YOU BETTER HAVE THIS FRAMED IN YOUR HOUSE
if not ill frame it in MINE like honestly wow
The colouring is crazy good- the lighting and shading is fantastic - I really love how there seems to be more light on the chess board, and damn just look at the folds in those guys' suits, its just so realistic. The dark colour scheme is incredible. I love the scenario - chess is commonly used as a metaphor for people planning out their pawns and plans - but I've never seen the chess pieces actually shaped as people. You grab the metaphor and drive it home on the best ride of its LIFE
LARA GOD YOU ARE SO
I JUST
I
I ADORE YOU, THANK YOU ; _____ ; adsshgh yeah I really made the metaphor a little too obvious haha
Somehow I still think the guy on the right looks too stuff and weird I have no idea what is up with that but maybe you have an idea?
But seriously wow thank you v __ v your comments are like shining orbs of glorious light THAT LEAVE ME INCAPABLE OF ANSWERING
FABULOUS?
CHARMING?
awwawww no problem <3333 <3333 I did not mean that in a bad way!!! I meant it like wow totally cool
OMFG SHINING ORBS OF GLORIOUS LIGHT
THATS A GREAT DESCRIPTION <3<3<3
ahh as for the guy on the right, i think i see what you mean uvu
for this face, it seems that the top part of his face (eyebrows/eyes area) is turned closer to the view than the bottom (nose/mouth area) just a bit! His neck is a bit too wide - and the shortness of his neck to his shoulder gives you the impression that hes about the slouch- but then his posture is upright. perhaps thats it?
YES THOSE. FABULOUS AND CHARMING AND WONDERFUL
And no I know you didn't mean it in a bad way! I was just saying in general haha
WOW OK YOU ARE COMPLETELY RIGHT I never .. knew it was like that wow thank you! His neck really is a behemoth lmao
I'll fix it up in photoshop I think! This was exactly the kind of advice I was hoping for, gah thank youuuuu j __ j
just for u
for me?
kya
you are the best
I really like the concept here and your gorgeous coloring!
(Me trying to critique) The guy on the right, proportion wise,
looks like his head is too low because of a very short neck.
I honestly don't know if it's just me or the coat. But your
lighting is so beautiful! Especially with the ripples and reflections.
You did a wonderful job with the lights since it gives off a feeling a depth
to me! Amazing job!